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Prompt: Forgotten
Like
the pint glasses in front of us, the conversation's just about run
dry when Sophia asks me if I remember that time when we were little
and we got into some cans of house paint in her parent's garage.
I
chew my lip and my eyes roll away from Sophia to the stuffed brown
bear in the corner of the bar that looks like it was frozen
mid-mauling with it's massive claws raised and its fanged maw open in
a roar, just as a cute guy with a mustache I'm hoping is part of some
group dare blocks my view, sees me, and grins.
Well
hello, sailor.
I
tell Sophia I don't remember the paint thing because my memory sucks
and it's all a Big Bird colored haze until around kindergarten.
Sophia
taps her pack of smokes on the bar and her mouth is a dark pink
parenthesis when she says to the bartender, “I'ma need another
shot,” and to me, “Lucky.”
I cannot tell you how happy I am to see new writing from you, Erin! I have missed your panache, verve and rounded sentences. Can't wait to send out the rallying cry: Spoonflipper? She's Baaaaaaaack!!
ReplyDeleteLOL! What a fun use of the prompt! I really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteExactly what Jo-Anne said. Word for word! She's obviously a sly and tricksy comment thief, and purloined every thought from my brain before I had a chance to hie myself over here to read your story. Erin, I could eat every sentence you eat with a spoon (maybe even the one you flip with) and feel well-fed for days. Lovely, witting, fabulous stuff.
ReplyDeleteMore please.